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Repaying Debts by Hailsyn

Hello! I don't know you, and you don't know me... But as I stumbled upon this deviation, I just had to give a critique!

Vision: Over all, I'll say that I can see the image clearly. However, the 'r' in the "Now I'll return the favour" is somewhat hard to see, but that doesn't really count now does it?
Originality: Okay... I see way too many of these split screen, split personality things. It's a common theme, but the expression and style is pretty unique.
Technique: I understand that you were playing around with effects. That's understandable, no worries~ The drawing itself looks flat, but the background adds depth to the drawing, which I like.
Impact: Over all it's a very nice piece. I love the expression and details. Everything is simply stunning~ Great job!
(I am horrid at giving critiques. orz)
The Artist thought this was FAIR
13 out of 14 deviants thought this was fair.


xMeulinLeijonx Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
(=^.^=) Well misjour
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